I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 02.07.2025 00:14

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He's always helping his ex

He always cracks his knuckles.

He is always late

How did you know you weren't the narc?

He's never available on Saturdays

He doesn't like her cat

He's always the last one to leave a party

Have you ever had a scary dream about a loved one or friend soon after their death?

He forgets his wallet